DRABBLE TRIO
by PATTI KURTZ RATED FRC |
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These drabbles were written in
response to the 2006 Tracy Island Writers Forum's Drabble
Challenge. The
challenge was as follows:
Choose three of the following
six topics and write one drabble for each of the topics you
chose. You will wind up with three 100-word drabbles on
whichever three topics you chose. Here are your choices:
A)
Scott during a rescue (could be his thoughts, someone
observing him, something he's actually doing, etc.).
B)
Virgil while playing the piano (again, could be his thoughts,
someone observing/listening, etc.).
C)
Gordon's and Alan's relationship as brothers (one or both of
them thinking about it, one of them thinking about the other,
someone else ruminating on their relationship, etc.).
D)
Lady Penelope (either her thoughts or someone else's about
her/what she does, etc.).
E)
The Thunderbirds (perhaps the ship's actual POV or someone's
thoughts about one or all of them, etc.).
F)
Parody drabble (anything goes, parody style).
Drabble
One
"His
Hands"
(in response to prompt B)
I love
watching his hands. Fingers long and slender step along the
ivory rectangles. Every motion smooth, as if his muscles and
joints become liquid. The music builds to a crashing
crescendo, and his rigid fingers pound the keys, mirroring the
hidden motion of hammers against strings. Earlier, those same
hands guided his 'bird into a mid air dance to rescue those
trapped divers. I've seen those tanned fingers squeeze the
trigger of a gun, or curl into fists, or gently wrap a bandage
around a bleeding wound. But when they dance along the
keyboard, the result is pure magic.
Drabble
Two
"Silence"
(prompt E)
Quiet
swaths me like thick cotton. My pulse thuds a steady drumbeat.
My boots thump the floor and my breathing rasps like a file
against metal.
"Alpha
Centauri." The sound of my voice reassures me that I can still
speak, still hear.
In the
control room, voices murmur in dozens of languages. Computers
hum as they sift through the signals. Stillness envelopes me
again on the observation deck where stars glide past, patterns
of crushed diamonds tossed onto a blue-black carpet. I gaze at
the blue sphere shimmering brighter than any constellation.
Earth. The reason I can bear the silence.
Drabble
Three
"Us"
(prompt C and a little of F)
"100
words?" Gordon frowned. "About our relationship?"
"Bet you
can't do it," Alan dared.
"I can sum
it up in three: pain in the butt." Gordon typed the words.
"That's
four."
"Can you
do better?"
Alan
snatched the keyboard and typed "Twins."
"We're not
twins."
"We're
more like each other than like Scott, John or Virgil."
"Maybe."
"What
about when I drove that race and you covered for me?"
"And got
grounded."
"Or when
you put goldfish in Scott's bathtub and I got blamed?"
Gordon
chuckled.
"That was
so not funny."
"Wait, I
know." Gordon erased everything and typed: "Tracys." |